习作评析(1)
某对外发行的英文刊物正在进行中学生英语征文,请根据下列提示,以Dont Lose Your Courage为题写一篇短文,以便向该刊投稿。
[提示]
1. 上高一的第一天;
2. 英语老师刘老师面带微笑进入教室;
3. 她自我介绍,应称呼她Miss Liu,而非Teacher Liu;
4. 要求我们每人到教室前自我介绍;
5. 我又怕又羞难以启齿;
6. 老师鼓励我,我讲得很好;
7. 难忘的第一节课;
8. 实践出真知。遇到困难不能灰心丧气。
[注意]
1. 词数100~140;
2. 不要逐字翻译提示,可适当增加细节使文章连贯。
[学生原文]
Dont Lose Your Heart
Never I shall(1) forget the first English lesson at Senior One given by Miss Liu. When she entered into(2) the classroom, we found that she was beautiful with a smile on her face. Then she introduced herself, saying that we should call her Miss Liu instead of Teacher Liu.
A moment later, she asked every(3) of us to go to the blackboard to say something about themselves(4) . When it was my turn, I felt so shyly(5) and fearful that I couldnt speak a word out. Miss Liu came to me and said kindly, Dont be afraid. Have a try. I believe you can do it well. My face turned red hearing that. At last, I went to the blackboard and was able to do it very well.
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