(1)One day 与提示的要求不符,应该改为One Sunday morning.
(2)在这一句中,存在句型和词组的误用。find out 意为查明,了解(情况),不能用在此处;find作发现某物解时,可以接动词-ing形式,表示动作正在进行,如:The next morning I found the shoots (秧苗)standing up straight , not a bit damaged. 也可以接动词的-ed形式,表示状态:When I went out, I found the street lined with people waiting for the coming hero.
(3)前边的三句表述混乱,而且未能切中题意,应该走向前去,问女孩叫什么名字或住在哪里,即We went up to her , asking what her name was and where he lived.
(4)be forced to 意为被迫,此外用had to 才符合语境。
(5)把there 改为where, where 引导一个非限制性定语从句。
(6)把were改为was,因为news消息,是不可数名词,谓语动词用单数。
(7)sometime可以作副词,表示某时,有朝一日,也可以作形容词,意为从前的,过去的;some time是一个名词短语,意为一段时间,有些时候。
(8)too to 意为太不能,表示否定,此处可以改为They were only too excited to see their child. / They were much / very excited to see their child.
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