习作评析(3)
习作题目:
根据下列内容写一篇描写Jenny的短文。
Jenny是我们班个子最高的女生。她的眼睛大而明亮,头发像黑色的波浪,鼻子高高的,牙齿雪白。我们选她为班长,并不是因为她是个美丽的姑娘,而是因为她学习好,乐于助人,很有礼貌,并且从不与别人争吵。在运动场上,她奔跑起来却像个男生。
词数:100左右。
参考词汇:qualities素质,quarrel争吵,naughty调皮的
学生原文
Those who study with Jenny in the same class will remember her as an excellent girl. She is the tallest girl in our class. Her eyes are big (1)。 Her hair makes you think of black sea(2)。 She has a high nose and her white teeth are as snow (3)。 We made her our monitor not only for her fine looks, but also(4)for her good qualities. So (5)she is good at her lessons and ready to help others. She never quarrels with everyone (6) about small things.
She is good-mannered. But sometimes (7)she is exactly like a naughty boy. How can one forget her if he or she has been with her for quite some time?
习作点评:
(1)要点遗漏,应是大而亮。
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