高中英语语法-习作评析（9）之二_高考语法

高中英语语法-习作评析（9）之二

　　　　He loves teaching， and is strict with his work ③ . He is always ready to help his students. He had ④ a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting， so he is very liked by his students ⑤ . He often reports to middle school students on how to learn English well ⑥ .

　　　　Now he is an adviser to our paper， and he offered a lot of good advices ⑦ . Under ⑧ his help we are doing better in our work.

　　　　名师点评

　　　　本篇习作要点齐全，语言精练，层次分明，基本上完成了写作任务。但考生在动词的运用上应多下功夫，要重视英语的习惯用语。

　　　　① British 前加 a .

　　　　②去掉 was .

　　　　③ with 改为 in， be strict with sb 表示对人格； be strict in 表示对工作认真。

　　　　④ had 改为 has .

　　　　⑤本句是典型的汉式英语，最好改为 so he is popular with his students .

　　　　⑥用词不当， reports 应改为 gives lectures .

　　　　⑦ offered 前加 has .

　　　　⑧ Under 改为 With . with one's help 是固定搭配，意为在帮助下。要注意英汉差别。

　　　　精品范文

　　　　W . J . Waston was a British， who was born in England in June， 1967. He graduated from a university in 1989， and then came to China with his wife in 1992. Now he is working in No. 1 Middle school as an English teacher.