习作评析(10)之一
习作题目
下列图画描述了查尔斯太太为丈夫买上衣后的经历,请根据图画内容,用英语写一篇 90-120 词左右的短文,以便刊登在 GUIDE TO ENGLISH TESTS 上。
注意:
1. 题目自拟:
2. 短文应包括图中要点。
学生原文
Mr Charles and His New Shirt
One day Mrs Charles went to a store, she went up and down in the store and at ① last bought a beautifil shirt for her husband. When she went back to home ② with the shirt, her husband was smoking in the sofa with a newspaper in his hand. Mrs Charles asked her husband to try out ③ the new shirt, but it was too large. Suddenly she came upon ④ good idea. She put the shirt into a basin of hot water, ⑤ then asked her husband to put on it ⑥ , but it was too small now, which made Charles quite ⑦ unhappy. When their son saw this, he made fun of his father. Then Mrs Charles had to ask her son to try on the shirt, ⑧ but it was too large for the little boy. Mr Charles couldn't help laughing at this.
名师点评
本文是一篇记叙文,考生能够领会图画的大体意思,并能捕捉到图中的细节,用连贯的语言记叙故事内容;考生文笔较为流畅,有的句子用词简洁,能很好的表达图画的内容,如:对第二幅图的描写。
【高中英语语法-习作评析(10)之一】相关文章:
最新
2016-02-29
2016-02-29
2016-02-29
2016-02-29
2016-02-29
2016-02-29