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本篇习作要点齐全,语言通顺。考生能熟练运用所学知识,按时间顺序较好地完成日记。但考生在连接词的运用上还需进一步努力。
( 1 ) visit 前加 a .
( 2 ) gave 前加 and ,在两个并列谓语之间应用连接词 and .
( 3 ) made 改为 held .举行晚会、聚会、会议需用动词 hold .
( 4 ) but 改为 and ,此处是一种并列关系,而非转折关系。
( 5 ) soon 前加 and .
( 6 )在日记的结尾考生巧妙地运用了倒装结构,使短文添彩。
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Wednesday March 18th, 2002 Fine
This morning, over twenty Australian middle school students came to our school for a visit. My classmates and I gathered at the school gate at 8:20 and gave them a warm welcome. Then I took them to the reception room and we had a get-together there. At ten o'clock, we showed them around our library, our lab and the school factory. At half past eleven, we had lunch with the Australian students in the school dining-hall and then gave presents to each other. Time passed quickly and soon it was half past one in the afternoon. We had to say good-bye to each other.
Never shall I forget the day March 18th.
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