What really made this essay different from all the others was a single phrase that leapt off the page at me?mosquito's voice. This phrase,unexpected and metaphorical,shows precise observation of life. It clearly expresses a complex set of features in the way the writer spoke. Think of the nights when you hear the high-pitched whine of a mosquito in the dark. You don't know where it is and you flap your hands madly trying to hit it,but usually without success.
Now think about the writer: Her voice was high-pitched,from nervousness probably,and she probably had the feeling that it came from somewhere else and was not under her control?just like the mosquito. A striking and very effective image that lifted this essay out of the crowd for me.
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