写作指导:
文体 记叙文,用第三人称,侧重描写这两个人的外表特征。
信息组织 信息组织可以有两条线索,一是分别逐项对比,二是先描述一个,再描述另一个。选择第一种比较容易辨别。
①身高对比;②长相对比; ③衣着对比;④神色;⑤方向
时态 一般现在时,现在进行时,一般过去时,现在完成时
参考范文
1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life, and is always ready to help other people.
2. One is about 1.90 metres tall, and the other is only about 1.65 metres, quite short. The taller has a big nose, a big mouth and a bald head, whilst the shorter one has a small nose, small eyes and curly hair. The taller is wearing a blue jacket, a pair of old shoes, and the shorter is wearing black trousers with sports shoes. Each of them took a plastic bag in their hands while going in a hurry and looked around sometimes. They ran away down his street and turned left at the red light.
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