首先做一个过渡:I wish that the present will bring him a number of influences.
接着写第一个论点及其细节论证:First, hopefully, with the watch, he will pay more attention to punctuality, which is an important merit of a person. In the past, diligent and warm-hearted as he was, he sometimes had no sense of time, which caused him to be late for many things and led to some trouble in work. In the future, the watch will always remind him of the time so that he will be able to do everything on time.
再写第二个论点及其细节论证:Whats more, I hope this watch will bring happy memories to him in the future. He used to tell me that he might feel lonely in the future after leaving high school and entering a completely new environment. The gift will surely bring him back to the good old days we gaily spent together and make him feel better when he misses the old friends in high school.
最后的总结一般用一句话即可,可以是对全文观点的归纳,也可以顺带提出自己的一个建议或者希望。但是建议或者希望的内容一定要简洁,否则就被视为跑题。
比如2007年高考作文的结尾就可以写为: I do wish that Tom will like this present, which will bring him a profound influence and motivate him to fight for a better future.
另外如果文章讨论的是一些具有负面影响的问题,也可以在结尾时顺带提一下如何解决这个问题,比如关于代沟产生的原因的话题,最后结尾的时候可以一方面总结代沟之原因,另一方面说出你的建议。例如:It is the lack of communication between the parents and the children that have led to the generation gap, and it is advisable that the both generations should talk more with each other to bridge the gap.
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