1.The Are No Good Reasons Why Boys and Girls Should Not Be Treated Equally.
析:此为一标题句,此作者滥用双重否定,从而使句子过长。宜改为:Boys and Girls Should Be Given Equal Treatment.
2.For instance,I knew how to communicate with other people and how to look after myself.The most important thing was that I learn to be independent.
析:从意义上讲,look after myself与independent关系紧密,可以合在一起。句子可改为:For instance,I knew how to communicate with others and how to look after myself as an independent girl.
3.Moreover,as some girls study harder than boys,they may be even superior.
析:moreover后若继续用从句,就会干扰读者的思维。可改为:Moreover,some girls are very dilgent.As a result,they may prove superior to ordinary boys.
4.What I mean to say is that well-intentioned law-makers sometimes make fools of themselves.
析:what从句并未提供新信息,故可删去。句子可改为:Well-intentioned lawmakers sometimes make fools of themselves.
三、词汇运用
多用书面语,少用口头语
相对口头语而言,书面语更能增添文章的厚重感和读者对文章的信任感。下列每一组句子中,第二句都使用了书面语言,用词更加规范,因而比前一个句子略胜筹。
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