3、自己的观点和看法写得空洞无物;
4、没有对70%,20%等百分数进行适当处理;
5、学生的作文大多停留在完成任务上,很少有精彩之处。
三、参考范文
The majority of the students, making up 70%, are more realistic and dont expect a high salary. They think it sensible to land a job as soon as possible. In this way, they hope to reduce the burden on their families. They also believe there are better opportunities for development offered in the west or in rural areas.
In order to be better prepared for the future job-hunting, one fifth of them choose to stay in universites for further education, or go to vacational schools to learn practical skills. The rest 10% are brave enough to start a company of their own, thus creating jobs for other graduates as well as themselves. The choice isboth challenging and rewarding.
As for me, I will take my interests and abilities into account while choosing a job. It may not be a decent job with a handsome income, but will surely be most suited to me. I hope my first job will offer an opportunity to learn new skills and gain rich experience.
70% of them think it makes sense that they realize an early employment by lowering their income expectations, thus reducing the burden on their families. They also believe therere better opportunities for development if they go to work in the west or rural areas. 20% of them consider full employment an unrealistic goal, so they choose to continue their further study or go to vocational schools to learn some practical skills to make better preparations for future careers. Finally, the rest 10% determine to set up their own businesses.
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