If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的,第一,作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感;第二,本文没有采用华丽的辞藻,但用词十分恰当,段落过渡自然,令人耳目一新。
2004高考英语满分作文
【全国卷I】
【试题回放】
假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人学中文,唱中文歌才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。
比赛时间:7 月18日 。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台
注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛talent show
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs Foreigners Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
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