About 9 oclock last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. I couldnt go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor.

　　I knocked at his door and said, Good evening, Mr. Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework.

　　Oh, Im really sorry to have disturbed you. Well do as you say. My neighbor said politely.

　　Thank you very much.. I said and went back to continue my study.

　　[名师点评]

　　这篇文章从整体上来看，内容完整，要点齐全。在准确领悟题意的基础上，用平实的语言，将文章娓娓道来，连贯而流畅。句式搭配长短结合。文章对对话的描写，很生动，让人有种身临其境的感觉。

　　【英语各档次的给分范围和要求】

　　第五档(很好);(21-25分)

　　1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。

　　2. 覆盖所有内容要点。

　　3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

　　4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。

　　5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

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