China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.
There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. Ill be looking forward to your reply. Ill show you around our great China if you come to China.
Yours sincerely ,
Li hua
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本文的语言非常流畅,我们可以看到,本文虽没有华丽的辞藻,但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用,如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出,同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。
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