So don't lose youself in your life.

　　第三段要总结问题，必须是从圆规(compasses) 和pencil的问题中的抽象出来，总结出来一个做人做事的普遍规律。可以写成：

　　From my point of view, we should be aware of our strengths and weaknesses and never show

　　due respect to everyone, for no one is perfect in this world.

　　官方给出的范文：

　　One possible version:

　　 From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil. The compasses are big, drawing a circle with ease, while the pencil is small, drawing a line with great effort. I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses, even pictures. So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show due respect for them.

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