The author fails to define the term violent behavior, thus we cannot evaluate if watching a great number of TV shows featuring violent scenes has any relation with teenage crime.
There exists the possibility that those children watch many television shows featuring violent scenes because they have inborn tendency of violence.
We do not know what kind of people responded to the survey, thus the respondents opinions may not represent those of all citizens.
We need to know how many teenagers who committed crimes frequently watch violent programs on TV, and how about the rate compared with normal teenagers.
Merely reducing the amount of violence shown during prime time may not sufficiently lower the rate of teenage crime.
Other solutions could also be used to achieve the authors purpose.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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