Although the examples are well chosen and support the writer抯 position, they are not always clearly explained.
For example, the writer claims that most women neither want to nor can look like Kate Moss but then contradicts that claim by explaining that a large portion of this society has done everything from liposuction to becoming bullimic to attain a supermodel look.
In general, the vocabulary is clear, but not particularly precise.
The sentences are formed correctly, but they lack effective variety.
Grammatical and mechanical errors occur, but they do not seriously interfere.
In almost every way, this essay is a typical 4 response.
4.The values of society have have changed so much during most recent years.
Many of these values have changed for the worst.
The media has been the vehicle that has taken us through these changes.
The media has created so many avenues for us to take to find so many of these changes.
They have created the avenues that children and young adults feel that they have to take.
Many years ago reporters and writers were telling us of all the good things that were happening in the world.
You could walk into a store and eventhough there was a war going on, we would read about the soldier that left his family to fight for his country.
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