这两种开头起码还能保证观点明确,如果BODY写的好也能拿到4.5甚至5分,但是可能是嫌这开头太模式化,或者不满意这种开头,自己写了些变体,结果使这种开头本来仅存的优势也失去了--即观点明确。请记住,ISSUE为立论,必有主论点,这个主论点可以立场中立,但一定要立场鲜明,这样才能使之后的BODY有效为论点服务。
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TOPIC: ISSUE88 - Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics.
The issue that the technologies effects on our society has been widely discussed. Somebody assert that technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics while others argue that technologies can not determine our custom and ethics. However, I have my special opinion that technologies indeed have great affected all aspect of our lives even traditional customs and ethics, but in contract, it is determined by our customs and ethics.
To begin with, as the developing of the technologies, the conditions of our lives have changed grandly from the old days.
Moreover, the change of our daily lives bring by technologies exert a subtle influence on social customs and ethics.
However, technologies cannot determine social customs and ethics all the time, and in contrary, it is determined by the social customs and ethics.
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