题目拆析
论点:With these changes, our office-supply departments will become the most profitable component of our stores.
论据:
1. Over 70 percent of the respondents to a recent survey reported that they are required to take more work home with them from the workplace than they were in the past.
2. Since Valu-Mart has not seen impressive sales in its office-supply departments in the past, we should take advantage of this work-at-home trend by increasing at all Valu-Mart stores the stock of home office machines such as printers, small copy machines, paper shredders, and fax machines. We will also increase stock of office supplies such as paper, pens, and staplers. With these changes, our office-supply departments will become the most profitable component of our stores.
攻击分析
论据1
A.首先题目中说明了这是一项调查。那么就很自然的联想到:1。这调查是谁做的?怎么做的?可信度如何?数据如何处理?【写作提示:这里易使用一系列的问句做攻击练熟,显的比较有气势,而实际操作性也比较高。建议将此类 套话 记住,做到条件反射最好】
B.对于调查有多少feedback?
C.收到的feedback中是否代表绝大多数的行业和职业?【写作提示:这里适合用 挑刺 的手法,不厌其烦的进行可能性的举例,比如:假设他们来自同一个行业,自然其普适性自然就不会很高。一般情况下, 挑刺找茬 的写法是在哪里都可以使用的,其关键就是将你的假设具体化、详细化,切记抽象而泛泛谈之】
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