Eg2:学生练习
There is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way.
我的开头:
By success it merely notes that you can live your life whatever as you want and you choose. This life style may help a person realize find the thing of the highest good to him/her and thus lend him/her ultimate satisfaction at all. Therefore, I vitally support this kind definition of success.
【第二种】:以故事开头。
:故事最忌讳:晦涩、难懂、中立。
讲一个story:要求
1)三句以内写完。
2)时间、地点、人物、事件尽量说实、说全、说细,让读者感觉不像是编的。
3)句式要求:词汇和句子一定得好,否则不抓人。因为你既然能以讲故事的方式开头,说明你对自己的写作水平足够自信,如果一来全是简单句,给人真实感觉却你的写作水平太差,与读者之前的预期dismatch了!所以不好。
因此:可以是很长的复杂句、套了从句的均可。
内容上:
如果水平较低:就一来首先扣题
B)第二句开始:elaboration这个故事越生动、形象、具体越好。
Eg:学生练习
There is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way.
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