专家指点：一篇SAT作文修改与评点_SAT写作

专家指点：一篇SAT作文修改与评点

　　SAT作文是SAT考试的一个重要组成部分，也是最为关键和最难的部分，它直接考查了学生对语言的运用能力。SAT作文的关键是运用大量的例证说明问题，而好的开头和结尾同样会为你挣得更高的分数。下面我们来看一篇学生的习作，老师对他的每一段多做了修改和点评，提出了很多宝贵的意见，大家可以参考一下。

　　Truth is not objective

　　Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below:

　　Akira Kurosawas film masterpiece Rashomon portrays several people who have witnessed a death. As each observer recounts the event as he or she witnessed it, we come to realize that each persons story varies greatly from every other account. Watching the movie, we reflect that the truth of an experienceand perhaps all truthis different for each person.

　　Assignment: What is your opinion of the claim that truth is not objective, but rather is determined by each individual? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

　　习作修改

　　学生习作

　　Great confidence is often put into what people see or hear. In a court, a judge will listen to witnesses and regard their words as evidence. However, is it possible that what we take in by eyes or ears, in another word, what we regard as truth, are not objective?