专家点评：SAT写作应避免的错误_SAT写作

专家点评：SAT写作应避免的错误

　　SAT写作是很多学生的弱点，在语言运用、语句结构、段落组织上都很欠缺，多数学生的文章只是平铺直叙，没有感染力，论点和论据之间有时显得很牵强，这和平时的练习以及积累有很大的关系，今天我们就来看一位学生的文章，写作老师给出了修改和点评，都是大部分学生容易犯的错误，希望学习以后能够对大家提高写作有所帮助。

　　Both Sides of an Issue

　　Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below.

　　In seeking truth you have to get both sides of a story.

　　- Walter Cronkite

　　Assignment: Do you agree with Walter Cronkite that its necessary to see both sides of an issue in order to discover the truth? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experiences, or observations).

　　学生习作

　　People often focus mostly on the advantageous side when they make a decision. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.

　　语言修改

　　Most often when people make a decision they focus on the advantages. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.