I dont believe popularity can give someone a sense of peace. There is a quote that says something like, I would rather have a few close friend than a thousand acquaintances. A popular person may, on the outside, seem to have all the friends in the world. On the inside, however, he or she may be screaming for one true and loyal friend to talk to.
It seems almost as if popular people have a certain authority over others. The popular kid always seems to have his/her close friends who are nothing more than attention-starved followers. Popularity can not be determined by how many friends one may have or who the coolest dressed person is. Abraham Lincolns quote about avoiding popularity in order to gain peace is quite true today. A self-peace is there for the taking and can be reached without the title of being popular.
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Megans response, although not as rich as Erics is still quite adequate. Most SAT readers would respond to this essay with a 4 and possibly a 5. Remember that each essay has at least two readers. Both scores are added to make a final score out of 12. Megan would probably fall into the 89 range.
She does not make direct mention of the quotes or their authors. However, she opens the second paragraph with the comment about popularity affording a sense of peace, which is a reference to the quotation by Lincoln.
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