No goal can be achieved without pain. To discover and develop our talents, to uncover who we really are, we need to resist temptations.
在上面的第一种写法中,首先我们要想清楚:What are good habits? 要做到这一点,我们最好还要弄清楚:What are bad habits?为此,文中列举了三个好坏相对的习惯:想早起床但结果还是在床上捱到日上三竿;想准时赴约却总是迟到;想每天看书却总是提不起精神。这样我们就把抽象的habit变成具体形象的了。
下面第二部分通过对比说明恶习的严重后果:可能丢掉工作,也可能造成不幸的人生。但就算对好习惯的重要性非常了解,很多人还是无法养成,从而引出问题:为什么这么难?
主体第三部分首先指出这是人的本性所然。接着首先让步:对舒适生活的追求某种意义上推动了科技的发展和人类的进步。但是,人生的苦乐是辩证的。通过努力养成好的习惯有助于强健体魄、提高工作效率以及维持正常的人际关系。
再看这道题的另一种写法:
Good Habits Result from Resisting Temptation
Most people know the importance of good habits. For instance, having regular physical exercise benefits health; reading books enriches knowledge; telling the truth wins others trust. Regrettably, many individuals find themselves trapped in negative habits. Even if they are also clear about the crucial role played by good habits and the tips of forming or keeping them, they have difficulties in practice, because they cannot resist the temptations.
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