主体段落:写明投诉的原因,要展开说明,可以说具体的理由和由此带来的后果 。这样展开就使信件的内容显得充实丰满,也符合正常的交际习惯。
结尾段:提出解决方案,不需要展开,做到公正公平。此段应该体现书信的礼貌原则,应当有类似的如您能,我将万分感谢的话语。这也是投诉信最能体现礼貌原则的地方。
范文:抱怨房间,要求换到单人宿舍。
Dear Sir/Madam, May 10, 2008
I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommates inconsiderate behavior. First of all, his friends are constantly visiting him; what is intolerable is that he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my stuff without asking me. In these situations, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.
I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.
Yours sincerely,
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