As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they dont need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
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1.佳句:With banks more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card.
临摹:随着市场经济的快速发展,金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。
2.佳句: A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school.
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