c.重复关键词语(repetition of key words)
示范段落7.1
① Until recently daydreaming was viewed as a waste of time.② Or it was considered an unhealthy escape from real life and its duties.③ But now some people are taking a fresh look at daydreaming.④ And it may be that more people are suffering from a lack of daydreaming than are suffering from too much of it.
7.3示范段落分析
顺序:熟悉度和对比关系
连接词语:①until recently②or③but④and⑤then
代词:① daydreaming②it④ it(the second one)
重复关键词:①daydreaming③daydreaming
④daydreaming
Exercise 7-1
Directions: Arrange the following sentences into a paragraph,using the coherence devices as the hints.
① Clearly, in agriculture and industry, the progress of a country depends on the busy hands of its working people.
② Finally, the establishment of efficient transportation and communication systems, essential services in a modernizing economy, relies heavily on a lab our force of expert craftsmen who take pride in their manual skills.
③ And of course the manufactures as well as the maintenance of machines of all kinds demands a large number of trained mechanics and technicians.
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