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Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth.
google替换search
an army of替换a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity替换more and more popular
Coincident with 非常地道的,表达 与 一致 的意思,替换With
Advancement替换development
Pour into 替换enter into
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