有了主题句,后面就该围绕这一主题句中consume worthlessly/spend worthlessly进行扩展,这个语词可称作这一段落的支配观点。如何扩展呢?先来分析一下这个短语中到底含有什么:第一,consume/spend,耗费时间;第二,worthless,毫无价值,甚至有害。
关于consume/spend的扩展现在已经变化的很清晰了,只要写出电脑耗了那些人大量的时间就可以了。至于怎样表现大量时间不须我再说了,举例就行了。
然后扩展worthless,这里也很清晰了,只需写出这些时间毫无回报,甚至有害,也是举例就可以了。见下文。
As is shown in the picture above, a hand is tightly glued to a computer mouse linked to a personal computer by an iron chain. Clearly, the iron chain stands for the control of the computer over the person who indulges himself in the cyberspace. An implication from the picture can be figured out that the personal computer, a high-tech device originally created for saving time and energy so as to benefit humankind, ironically turns out to be a gadget murdering the time and energy of quite some people.
The personal computer worthlessly consumes the time of those addicted to it. A survey shows the average time spent on it of those addicted amounts to 16 hours a day. And the minimum continuous time spent on the computer is 12 hours, while the maximum soars surprisingly to 168 hours-a whole week! Needlessly to say, the computer has eaten up their time for work, for sports and, worse still, their precious time for rest-a natural activity for refreshment to keep the body functioning normally.
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