Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your rommate always has friends visiting. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. Respect for the accommodation officer:（最好还是简单写成Dear officer:）

 First, i would like to thank the College give me arranged a room.But i need a new room.And i hope is a single room.（又一中式英语，三句可合并成：I would feel grateful if you can arrange me a new single room.） Because my roommate was always have some friends will visit him（always has some friends visiting）, i think there are（I 要大写，there are 放在此多余，要去掉）a lot of friends is a very good thing.But for me is influential, let me work cannot be quiet, cannot concentrate on my work.（改为But it is influential for me to concentrate on working in a quiet environment） Please be considerate. 

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