薛鹏点评:淡化模板;观点鲜明。
薛鹏解析:
1. various stories 公众资讯报道
2. concerning 关于
3. have been pushing into spotlight 成为关注的焦点
4. conflicting ideas clash in 矛盾的观点在方面互相碰撞
解析:clash v碰撞
二段:正方三个观点的展开:
My arguments could be easily explored. One contributing factor triggering manifold malefactions could be owed to the external circumstances in which the one is raised. To put in details, in some poverty-stricken or violent families, children are usually not properly taken care of and they stand few chances of receiving fine education, it is likely that such children may easily be led astray and even worse, they may conduct some anti-social offences. Still, pornographic or otherwise vulgar forms of media, have a really adverse impact on the young because the young can, in most cases, find it rather difficult to make positive choices about the types of influences in their lives, thus,it is possible for them to turn to a life of crime. Last, many perilous products that could be harnessed commit crimes are very easily and cheaply available to the youths. In fact, guns are sold in a number of stores in some countries. This fact alone makes it very easy for some people to embark on the criminal road.
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