三段:反方二个观点的展开
Granted, some people might remain suspicious of my stand and believe that those perpetrators are born to be evil. Some people argue that habitual malefaction is the main root cause of high crime rate. As for those felons such as gangsters boss or professional blackguards, to break the law is to take revenge on the society which they think unfair. Besides, some people contend that such is human nature to be greedy, selfish and jealous, which accounts for many types of crimes. It is also found that some women commit economic crimes simply because they are more vain and avaricious than others.
薛鹏解析:
1. habitual malefaction 惯性犯罪
2. felons 重罪人
3. gangsters boss or professional blackguards 黑帮大哥和职业流氓
4. take revenge on the society which they think unfair 报复认为不公平的社会
5. vain and avaricious 虚荣的贪婪的
尾段:再次亮明观点 + 总结理由
In a nutshell, I re-affirm my stand that different crimes could be combination of various elements, however, in comparison with evil nature, external factors actually play a profound influence in leading some immature or inexperienced people to go astray.
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