5.3示范段落分析
主题句: Our neighborhood has been changed.
主题句关键词: changed
主题句隐含的问题:How has the neighborhood changed?
细节: 1. a superhighway builtnoisy and full of cars
2. full of billboards, traffic signs and litterdirty
结论句: Now the whole neighborhood has become dirty, noisy andfull of cars.
结论句关键词: dirty,noisy and full of cars
结论句总结了细节并回答了主题句提出的问题。
Exercise 5-1
Directions:Read the following paragraph.Find out the topic sentence and the concluding sentence, and rearrange the details so that the paragraph will make sense.
① In less than three years the farm had gone to pieces.②All the windows had been broken out of the big two-story farm house.③In the front of the house the grass was about three feet tall andthe barn yard was full of weeds instead of pigs squealing to be fed.④There were no more cows to milk or horses to ride.⑤My grandmothers farm has a lot of enjoyable memories for me,but after she died, I left home to join the army and when I returned,I was disappointed at the changes that had taken place.⑥ Paint was peeling off the house and the porch roof was sagging.⑦ Lively as the place had been before my grandmother died, it seemed to have died with her now.⑧This farm had once been lively with the noise of a tractor plowing the land and a dog barking whenever someone came up to the house.
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