Both Shanghai and New York are cities of great wealth and poverty.In both cities,there is a great deal of beauty and a great deal of ugliness.Many people in Shanghai are as kind and helpful as those in New York.Conversely,some people in Shanghai are as dangerous as those in New York.In both cities,there are people who work all day and people who work all night.Both cities are never asleep.
To some visitors,both Shanghai and New York are a paradise and a jungle.
24.2 Analysis of the Model Essay(范文分析)
From the above point-to-point essay,we can see that the similarities and differences of Shanghai and New York are as follows:
①Differences:
a.population(homogeneous S
(heterogeneous NY
b.language (Chinese S
(English NY
C.cost of living(low S
(high NY
d.transportation(buses and bikes S
(cars and subways NY
e.cooling appliances(fans S
(air-conditioning NY
②Similarities:
a.both are most densely populated
b.both are cities of great wealth and poverty
c.both are beautiful and ugly
d.both have kind and helpful people and dangerous people
e.both are never asleep
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