4. 时态混乱
原:Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.
改:Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.
评:过去时的句子中冒出了现在时,同学你太粗心了,要仔细检查哦~
原:I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.
改:Id like to explain / I will explain
评:可能是两种说法记混了吧,结果把时态搞错了
5. 主谓不一致
原:The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.
改:The way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being.
评:谓语之前有两个名词时,主谓搭配的问题就常常出现了。这里真正的主语应该是单数名词the way,所以与之搭配的谓语也应该是单数的is。
6. 重复累赘
原:From my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country.
改:From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country.
评:from my point of view和I think重复啦,保留一个就好。当然这里建议留下更高级的from my point of view.
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