原:There are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory.
改:Majority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long.
评:中文句式说的有很多人,但别一看到有就非要用there be句型不可哦,直接摆出主谓宾就行了。
things that can be memorized for long,被动语态明显更地道~
7. 中式英语
原:Thus, one is easier to draw bosses attention and gain appreciation.
改:Thus, its easier for you to draw bosses attention and gain appreciation.
评:中文习惯说人们可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力,而英语则习惯说Its easier for sb. to同学们要注意中英表述习惯的区别哦!
托福写作中的语法错误是考生很难避免的一大难题,大家只能通过不断的练习和修改、分析来逐步提高,可以多看一些托福写作范文,积累相关句型和模板,以减少失误。
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