told a moment ago a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman us to the company without delay. The two Canadians happily claimed their wallet, contained their passports, flight tickets, some cash credit cards. They expressed thanks to me. I feel it is really a great pleasure to help
others.
第一处:此处指"我注意到一伙人围着两个紧张的外国人",运用了notice sb. doing sth.结构,a group of people与surround之间是主动关系。故surrounded改成surrounding。第二处:根据前面的"two anxious foreigners… they"可知,此处要用可数名词的复数形式表示"那两位游客"。故tourist改成tourists。第三处:修饰谓语动词left要用副词,指"粗心地丢失了"。故careless改成carelessly。第四处:此处是指"在警察的帮助下"。故without改成with。第五处:此处指"我们被告知",所以用一般过去时的被动语态。故told前加上were。
第六处:and是并列连词,所以此处的时态要与前一个分句中的were told一致。故drive改成drove。
第七句:分析句子结构可知,本句运用了非限制性定语从句,而that不能引导非限制性定语从句,要用which,which指代先行词their wallet。故that改成which。
第八处:这里是说钱包里的东西,是并列关系,而不是选择关系。故or改成and。第九处:此处指"他们表达了他们对我的感激"。故our改成their。第十处:others是代词,泛指"其他的人或事物"。故去掉the。When I was 10, I was asked to make a speech "My Dream" before the whole class! With so many eyes fixed upon me, you can imagine how nervous I was. However, I had no choice but prepare for it. To draft the speech was the easiest for me, good writer, but the part lay in my oral presentation from my memory. The real moment came I stood on the platform, my heart
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