I’ve received your letter, and I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China to study.

　　What you heard in the past about our schooling is true. We used to have a lot of homework every day, even on weekends and vacations. Having endless exams was another characteristic of our school.

　　However, now we have mastered studying, and our school life is getting more and more colorful and interesting. In class, we are active in discussing and solving problems. Sometimes one of the students is asked to teach other students. I love this kind of teaching method —it makes me feel I am a great student. After class, we enjoy a variety of activities, such as dancing, making speeches, and joining in English Corner. As far as I know, everyone is happy with their lives in our school.

　　I hope you come to my school to study. I’m sure that you will soon like it and we will become very close friends.

　　这封邮件格式正确,内容衔接恰当,给人一气呵成之感。介绍素质教育改革前后的状况时,主次分明,详细生动。最让人称赞的是,本文人情味很浓,读起来好像真的是给自己的一个朋友写信。这也是英语新课程标准对写作的新要求,即增加了情感因素。在准确流畅表达写作要领的同时,适当增加句子的人情味,使文章读起来更亲切,完全达到与目标读者进行交流的目的。例如:"As far as I know, everyone is happy with their lives in our school."表示作者对现在生活的喜悦心情。"I hope you can come to my school to study ... we will become very close friends."表示作者对朋友的浓厚情谊。

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