Last Saturday we had a party at home. Dad's friends come1.________

　　along with their families. Since Mom was not at home, Dad2.________

　　and I had to prepare everything, so it turned out such a miracle3.________

　　that they did make it! Everything went perfectly fine.4.________

　　A lot of kids who came that day. I had the most wonderful time5.________

　　with Steven. It was just amazed to find someone so much6.________

　　like me. We had a lot of things by common. The time seemed7.________

　　short to me, and I wished we could have had some more time8.________

　　to continue the conversation. Hopeful we're going on9.________

　　a trip together next summer, and also summer after next.10.________

　　答案与解析：

　　1．come→came　整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。

　　2．√

　　3．so→but　前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。

　　4．they→we　根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称，此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。

　　5．去掉who　本句为简单句，去掉who。

　　6．amazed→amazing　主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”。

　　7．by→in　固定短语have...in common表示“有……相同之处”。

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