成都市2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练(9)附参考范文
【写作要求】
根据提示的情景,用英文写一篇80-100词的短文。不必根据中文逐字逐句翻译。
【学生实作】
Our school has a long history. It is told that it dated from one hundred years ago. From it was founded on, there were more and more students in it. And the former students all did well in their studying. Some of them are outstanding. Because of their good studies and hard work, many of the schoolleavers have become experts in different fields. These years our school has changed great, it becomes more and more beautiful. Besides, the teachers' teaching methods are more advanced than before. At the same time, the students study very hard, and we are determined to make great contribution to our school.
We like our school very much! We are proud of it!
【评析】
1. 第2句:is told 应为is said。(以下错误均在第一段)
2. 第2句:dated应改为dates。
3. 3句:from...on不能表示从过去的某个时间一直到现在的情况,因此这里用since较好。另外,from...on中间应是名词,而不能是从句。
4. 第3句:主句中应用现在完成时态,表示从过去一直到现在的情况。把there were改为there have been。
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