67.去掉when

　　68.cooker改为cook

　　69.but改为and

　　70.√

　　71.about后加to

　　72.Shake改为Shaking

　　73.apologize改为apologized

　　74.me改为myself

　　75.month改为months

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　　高考英语书面表达讲义：健康幸福话题作文

　　例1： 根据下面提示，写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。

　　(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。

　　(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。

　　(3)提出自己的看法。

　　注意：单词数120个左右。

　　Wealth and Happiness

　　Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。

　　But some people believe wealth can't bring them happiness. For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!

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