②在表述观点这一部分,作者集中论述阅读经典文学名著对学生的好处,主题显得较为狭隘。在论证说明中能考虑到举例说明是好的,但所举的例子是自己的私人经历,说服力不够,而且跟主题偏离得有点远了。

　　③开头最好能点明写这个报告的原因。结尾如果能提出自己关于如何提高学生的阅读兴趣的建议就更好了。

　　④整个文章的语气太个人化,不符合报告相对严肃的写作风格。

　　成稿:

　　Research has been done on Chinese middle school students’ attitudes towards classic works of literature. It indicates that Chinese students are not interested in reading classic works of literature. Among the 40 students interviewed, as many as 20 said they have never read any classic work of literature while only 5 said they read them often. None of these students read classic works of literature every day and the number of students who read occasionally is 15.

　　This fact is sad. Classic works of literature are the legacy given by our ancestors. Many classic works of literature look at the common human themes, which are universal no matter how time changes. For example, many morals of Aesop’s Fablesare still true in modern life. In a word, it is necessary for students to read more classic works of literature. Schools and government can give a hand by organizing some reading festivals for students. Teachers can also help by encouraging students to read more in or out of class.

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