Overjoyed, I grasped it back quickly. It turned out that the driver of the bus I often take saw the picture of me on my iphone screen. Knowing that I was a student of this school, he sent it to our reception office.
There is no happiness which is better than that acquired by getting back what has been lost. Moreover, I am greatly moved by what the driver did for me. Ordinary as he is, he is indeed a worthy man and respectable. The event will always remind me to be kind and helpful.
【作文点评】
本文由问句Oh, my God! Where is my iphone? 引入话题,吸引读者的注意。然后直接点明话题“我的手机掉了”。接着第二段完整地描写了其经过和失而复得的全部过程。最后一段谈到了作者自己的感受。本文要点齐全,很好地完成了写作任务。尤其是文章中用一些形容词巧妙地表达了作者态度的转变: sad, uneasy, overjoyed, moved, kind and helpful。文章多处使用各种从句,非谓语动词和各种固定句型,几乎每一个句子都是高级句型,读起来流畅自然。
(半)开放作文是一种比传统的“书面表达”限制更少,留给考生自由发挥空间更多的书面表达题型。这样的考试模式注重突出语言的应用,突出在语境中对学生语言能力的考查。与传统的“书面表达”相比,这种“开放作文”对学生构思、表达、写作以及语句的组织应用能力有了更高的要求。它要求考生在写开放作文时,要注意审题,尽可能做到内容充实、逻辑清晰、表达得体、语言准确。这样的考试模式能让考生发挥出自己的特长,有利于高校选拔优秀学生。
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