题四：

　　Looking at the picture, I can see two cactuses growing in a large area of desert. The mother cactus is holding an umbrella to protect the baby cactus from the baking sun. But against her good wish, the baby cactus is bending down and turning weak in the shade of the umbrella.

　　This makes me think of what happens in our daily life.

　　Like the mother cactus in the picture, parents are making every effort to create a comfortable environment for their children. But unfortunately, they have forgotten one important fact. No one can grow up without experiencing pain and difficulties. Too much protection from parents has a side effect on children. Just like the baby cactus in the picture, how can it grow up healthily without sunlight?

　　So parents, please throw the umbrella away. Let children face whatever may lie ahead of them so that they will be able to grow naturally.

　　1. 本文结构合理、脉络清晰：作者首先描述图画中的内容，然后解释自己对这幅画的理解，把图片和生活结合起来，谈论图片的深层意义。

　　2. 使用了非谓语动词，如Looking at the picture，to create a comfortable environment for their children等。

　　3. 使用了高级词汇和短语，如protect…from…, bend down, in the shade of , think of, make every effort等。

　　4. 使用了过渡词，如but, so等。

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