【学生样本1】

　　My friends and relatives think highly of knowledge.In their opinion, first, knowledge can make them a smart person.Second, knowledge is a sign of a high­quality person.Third, the use of knowledge can help them make money.

　　【评论点拨】 主题句简明到位，论据排列清晰，语言表达比较准确， 内容相对薄弱。

　　【学生样本2】

　　Among my friends, there are some attitudes towards knowledge.Some think knowledge is nothing but a pile of principles, theories and even some boring and exhausting words; many_people_with_rich_knowledge_cannot_be_paid_off_by_their_social_status.Some consider knowledge very important, because with useful knowledge they can get a good job or earn much money.Other_great_men_without_much_knowledge_and_many_in_lower­class_with_great_knowledge_think_it_is_so­so.They have seen many.

　　【评论点拨】 主题句有统摄作用，内容比较丰富，但三个观点的分述，逻辑上有交叉的地方，但词不达意的地方也多，例如画线的地方。

　　【参考范文】

　　运用你的写作知识评价一下这篇参考范文。

　　①The Power Is the Ability to Use Knowledge

　　②People around me think highly of knowledge.③Teachers think students are the future masters of the nation who should learn enough knowledge.③Parents believe knowledge can help their children get rid of ignorance and poverty.④Knowledge is useful to both our nation and our family.

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