考生首先要认真审题， 文章以一般现在时为主。在组织内容时，可恰当使用连接词和过渡词。为了提升文章的档次，可使用一些高级词汇和句式。另外，注意续写内容与所给内容要紧密衔接。

　　Hi，TigerMom，

　　What_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_ many_parents_in_China._My_idea_is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all­A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected.

　　The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do. 【作文点评】

　　本文定为五档，得分24分。文章很好地完成了试题规定的任务：首先作者表明了自己的态度，然后举例说明了自己的理由，最后作者给这位家长提出了解决问题的4条建议。该文语言流畅，结构清晰，逻辑严密；使用了复杂多变的句式结构，词汇选用恰当、丰富。语言错误较少；有效地采用了不同的连接手段，完全达到了与目标读者交流的目的。

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