2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

　　3．书写须清晰、工整。 Hi，TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is___________________________________ 【精彩美文】 Hi，TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all­A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly，let her live like a lovely girl；let her have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

　　【全品点睛】

　　①行文逻辑：提出观点→解释原因→给出建议。较好地使用了连接词语，如：furthermore，more importantly等。

　　②词汇短语：运用了较高难度的词汇。如：evaluate，university admission，development in wisdom，never be ignored，turn out not to be, by no means等。

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