2.亮点或采分点:
用了一些较复杂句式,如:宾语从句,表语从句和状语从句等,这些结构的使用提升了文章的档次。
3.错误更正:
①waste前加a。a waste of意为“浪费”。
②better spend改为be better spent。根据句子结构,这儿应用被动结构。
③many pleasures改为much pleasure。pleasure当“乐趣”讲时,是不可数名词。
④去掉a。“以……为条件”是on condition that…。
⑤which改为出that。guarantee后接的是同位语从句,而不是定语从句。
【参考范文】
Are Paintings Worth Buying?
About buying paintings, different people have different ideas. Many people think that buying paintings is a waste of money. They say that the money could be better spent on more useful things. On the contrary, others think paintings are worth buying. They say paintings can give them much pleasure. What' s more, they can earn money by buying or selling paintings.
Personally, I think we can buy some paintings on condition that we have much money, I think a big advantage of buying paintings is that people can get lots of fun and pleasure in enjoying paintings. But like any other investment, there is no guarantee that you will make huge profits by buying paintings.
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