1. 为什么很多中国人喜欢过外国节日;
2. 你对传统节日的看法和观点;
3. 你的做法。参考词汇:文化遗产cultural heritage
分析:
As society develops, many people celebrate foreign festivals in China. They believe it’s cool. At the same time, they don’t think our traditional festivals are a big deal. However, I disagree. I think we should pay more attention to our own festivals because our traditional festivals are a very important part of our cultural heritage. And our traditional festivals are just as interesting as many foreign festivals. As our country becomes stronger, the world will learn more about our culture and festivals. Maybe one day people in other countries will celebrate our Spring Festival as well. So, we should try our best to protect our own festivals and protect our cultural heritage as well.
1. 初稿基本完成了写作任务的要求,文章包含了提纲中给出的要点信息,从结构上看还是比较完整的。
2. 存在的问题:
1) 第二段中的第一个理由"我们的传统节日是文化遗产的一部分"只用一句话带过,读起来很单薄,缺少说服力。
2) 陈述的几条理由之间衔接不够紧密,条理不是很清楚。
3) 结尾部分没有实质性的建议和内容。另外,在做总结时,用"so"是比较口语化的用法,在这里使用"in conclusion"或者"all in all"等短语会更好。
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