而且正确且恰到好处的运用了定语从句,运用了what引导的主语从句,so that 引导的结果状语从句,使文章增色不少,同时提高了档次。从整体上看,段落分明,层次清晰,是一篇不错的记叙文。
从整体上看基本完成了写作任务,运用一般过去时以第一人称描述了发生在上周的事情,符合题目要求。同时,作者在写作过程中思路比较清晰,运用了一些衔
Firstly, we had a Class meeting Which made us realize the dangers of smoking.Next we told people that smoking did great harm not only to our health but also to our mind,especially for us teenagers.And then many people came to ask us some questions.What impressed me most was a Senoir 3 student who became addicted to smoking because of the pressure of the following college Entrance Examination.With our efforts he decide to stops smoking.
NOW more and more people have made up their minds to
give up smoking.We should study hard and make progress every day.We Should form good habits so that we can spend most of our time learning thing useful and valuable.
实例指导3—Our Spring Outing
【写作任务】
假设你是红星中学高三、‘班的学生李华;为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
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